Friday, March 2, 2012

Haiku!

A Haiku is a poem with 3 lines. The first has 5 syllabes. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllabes. Kidzone has a good page on them here:

http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm


Please write your Haikus in the Comments!

20 comments:

  1. Happy all the time,
    Sleepovers every weekend,
    Hanging out with friends.
    From,
    Ashley

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    1. Dear Ashley,
      I think your poem is great.It is great by that you described you beautifully.
      From ,
      Sa`mya

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  2. Swif swif of my pants
    Running on the cold wet grass
    Swift kick through the air

    by Lilly

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    1. Dear Lilly,
      Is your poem about soccer? I like how you side swif kick.
      From,
      Anna

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  3. Hop hop all around
    I hope no one takes my foot
    Hop back in my cage


    by Huver

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    1. Is it a bunny ?
      from, Lilly

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  4. What am I?

    I am a red bird
    With black around my orange beak
    My head has a crest

    Niklas

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    1. Are you a cardinal?

      From,
      Gregory

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    2. Dear Niklas,
      is this creature a cardinal?
      Sincerely, Daniel

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    3. Dear Nik,
      Are you a cardinal?

      From,
      Sa`mya

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  5. Practice your guitar.
    In a minute after this
    PRACTICE YOUR GUITAR!!

    (says my mom)

    From,
    Claire

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  6. What am I?

    I am gray and white
    My favorite food is seals
    I have rows of teeth

    Niklas

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    1. Dear Niklas,
      using your many descriptive clues, my very best guess is that this creature is a great white shark, one of the most feared animals in the ocean.
      Sincerely, Daniel

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    2. Are you a plume?


      From:Cyrus

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    3. Are you a blackberry?
      from, Gideon.

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    4. Dear repliers,

      Yes I am a shark a great white shark to be exact. Daniel was correct. Some people thought it was an orca but I said gray not black.

      Niklas

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  7. ABE MY DOG
    My dog is friendly
    I love him like chocolate
    He loves his food
    From,
    Anna

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    1. Dear ANNA your dog sounds sweet and freindly
      from, Gideon

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  8. Haiku by Daniel

    Opossums eat them
    Mouthwatering, plump juicy berry
    Delicious, sapphire.

    What am I?

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