tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post9201272612073249485..comments2024-01-03T11:10:14.929-08:00Comments on Sunnyland 4th Grade!: Deliciously Descriptive WritingMr. Pahlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14214375301706299614noreply@blogger.comBlogger49125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-45190407885468360842013-10-18T17:49:31.801-07:002013-10-18T17:49:31.801-07:00Dear Neri,
I love those books too. I own 1,2...Dear Neri,<br /> I love those books too. I own 1,2,3,4, and 6. I need 3 1\2 and 5. I love that its like a book that EVERYONE loves " Diary of a wimpy kid". If you like those you will love these.<br /><br /> From,<br /> ToriAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-58964351226189847052013-10-18T17:35:43.541-07:002013-10-18T17:35:43.541-07:00Dear Evyn,
I've heard that's a really ...Dear Evyn,<br /> I've heard that's a really good book. I should ask Ms. Avera if group 4 can read that book after we finish "Dear Mr. Handsaw" . Its about a boy named Leigh botts who writes to his favorite author. We are on Pg. 72 <br /><br /> From,<br /> Tori<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-23089120049938458832013-10-18T13:01:41.028-07:002013-10-18T13:01:41.028-07:00Dear fourth graders,
I’m reading Harry Potter five...Dear fourth graders,<br />I’m reading Harry Potter five by J.K. Rolling in the book it said the stairs started to creek and the ground was trembling. I like how the writer said the ground was trembling. <br /> By Jackson <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-64347490963425659322013-10-18T12:57:08.574-07:002013-10-18T12:57:08.574-07:00Hi everybody. The book I am reading is called The ...Hi everybody. The book I am reading is called The great wall of Lucy wu. It was written by Wendy Wang-long Shang. This book has very descriptive words so far. My favorite sentence is when Lucy said her brother quietly ate his quiche, two hot dogs, a bread roll, and most of Chef Tso’s spicy chicken. Right when I read that sentence my mouth started to water, because I love quiche! I recommend this book to students, because it has very delicious writing and it has lots of humor in it. Sincerely, Amaya.<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-57660730216960520542013-10-18T12:56:14.870-07:002013-10-18T12:56:14.870-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read Nancy drew and the secre...Dear 4th graders,<br /><br />I read Nancy drew and the secret of the old clock by Carolyn knee in it she says Nancy leaped out of her car and she dashed across the rode.<br /><br />I like the part where she says she dashed across the rode I like how she said dashed instead of ran<br /> <br />From Kayden<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-15160376538723995312013-10-18T12:53:45.403-07:002013-10-18T12:53:45.403-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read a book called The Dead B...Dear 4th graders,<br /><br />I read a book called The Dead Boys by Royce Buckingham. In it the author writes: franticly, Teddy dragged himself to his feet and stumbled across yard to his house. I like how the author says that Teddy dragged himself to his feet and stumbled across the yard to his house instead of; Teddy got up and went across the yard to his house.<br /><br />From,<br />Sarah.M<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-15006220374177498702013-10-18T12:47:46.904-07:002013-10-18T12:47:46.904-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read dork diar...Dear 4th graders,<br /> I read dork diaries tales from –a – not – so- smart miss know it all from Rachel Renee Russell. One part I thought had delicious descriptive writing was when it said “the door slowly opened and a tall figure came out, a skinny old lady with no teeth stood there scowling at us”. I liked the part when instead of frowning it said scowling.<br /> <br /> Sincerely, <br /> Neri <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-36931094850416977392013-10-18T12:46:17.213-07:002013-10-18T12:46:17.213-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read captain underpants by D...Dear 4th graders, <br /><br />I read captain underpants by DAVpilky. In it she says, when Melvin sat down generous helpings of yellowish, pudding – like goo slowly dribbled down the chair, collecting into creamy, gelatinous puddles beneath him. "." I like how he used a lot of descriptive words.<br /><br />I look forward to reading about STRONG VERBS AND VIVID DESCRIPTIONS that you find in your reading.<br /><br />From, <br />Gavin<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-17888697550246955002013-10-18T12:46:15.139-07:002013-10-18T12:46:15.139-07:00Dear fourth graders I read the book Out of my mind...Dear fourth graders I read the book Out of my mind. The authors name is Sharon M Draper. The part that I liked was when she said the whump and whoosh of the furnace coming alive each morning. I like how she said the furnace coming alive each morning. I would recommend this wonderful book to someone.<br /><br />By Sarah.H<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-9897014695027706842013-10-18T12:45:59.327-07:002013-10-18T12:45:59.327-07:00Dear Mr. Pahl,
Hi everyone my name is Asher. A go...Dear Mr. Pahl,<br /> Hi everyone my name is Asher. A good part in Harry Potter is … his head throbbed wildly! I liked that the author did not yoose his head hurt. When I was reading I could understand his pain. The author is J.K Rowling. Enjoy! <br />From, Asher<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-42681324419986137052013-10-18T12:43:50.125-07:002013-10-18T12:43:50.125-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read The secret of Cacklefur ...Dear 4th graders,<br /><br />I read The secret of Cacklefur Castle by Geronimo stilton. In it he says, "A cold wind blew up and lifted the cheddar- colored leaves off the ground. I watched them float and swirl in the night air." I like how he used "the cheddar colored leaves" instead of just saying "the orange leaves." <br /><br />From, <br />Anny<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-51082420294921596322013-10-18T12:41:57.823-07:002013-10-18T12:41:57.823-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read The case 39 by Jordan ...Dear 4th graders,<br /><br />I read The case 39 by Jordan kordman . In it he says , "dans mind crossed when the truck bursted fast and hit the back of the bus. ." I like how he said the truck bursted fast " instead of just saying . The truck hit the back of the bus <br /><br />I liked that book so much it makes me want to read it again<br /><br />From, <br />danny<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-4630039012761009152013-10-18T12:37:20.381-07:002013-10-18T12:37:20.381-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I like the part in Cupcake Diari...Dear 4th graders,<br />I like the part in Cupcake Diaries by Coco Simon on page 131 when a girl named Sydney put makeup and tanner on a girl that she looked like a tangerine, glittery blue eye shadow covered her eyes. On page 126 when the cupcake club walked across the drive way to check something out, the table over there was covered with black cloth with silver stars hanging from it. There were super glittery makeup cases all over the table and a black banner with the printed kind of letters that you order from the store tied to the canopy with small but readable letters the said, “PGC’s Makeover magic.” I like how she said, “Glittery blue eye shadow covered her eyes and that she looked a tangerine.” Instead of just saying, “Blueness covered her eyes and that she was pale.”<br />From Kyle<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-9120654320620727912013-10-18T12:25:16.944-07:002013-10-18T12:25:16.944-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-35799836067345796792013-10-17T12:57:31.057-07:002013-10-17T12:57:31.057-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read I survived the shark at...Dear 4th graders, <br /><br />I read I survived the shark attack of 1916 by Lauren Tarshis.in it he says ‘’the shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open its white dagger teeth gleaming in its blood red mouth’’. I love the descriptive words in that sentence.<br /><br />From, <br />Maximus<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-57013109733198277842013-10-17T12:50:28.143-07:002013-10-17T12:50:28.143-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read diary of a wimpy kid dog...Dear 4th graders,<br /><br />I read diary of a wimpy kid dog days by Jeff kenny . In it he says, "we burst into mom and dads room and I told them our house was haunted and we had to move immediately." I like how he used "we burst" and haunted instead of we went into mom and dads room and told them it was scary." <br /><br />I look forward to reading about STRONG VERBS AND VIVID DESCRIPTIONS that you find in your reading.<br /><br />From, <br />Sebastian r<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-38371956932336399282013-10-17T12:46:05.183-07:002013-10-17T12:46:05.183-07:00Dear 4th graders,
I read Big Nate goes for broke ...Dear 4th graders,<br /><br />I read Big Nate goes for broke by Lincoln pierce .you can see on page 135 in it Nate is caching something for his friend and falls and brakes his arm. Here’s a sentence on this page. By the time I realize I’m losing my balance it’s too late. There’s no way to stop myself. Look out below! “I like how he used instead of he fell and got hurt he put more excitement in it. sorry that actually was three sentences. <br /><br />From,<br />ELLIS!<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-16601283364271211582013-10-16T12:53:04.465-07:002013-10-16T12:53:04.465-07:00Dear 4th graders
I am reading The Hunger Games by...Dear 4th graders<br /> I am reading The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins. And I liked when she said when I wake up the other side of the bead is cold. My fingers stretch out seeking Prims warmth. But only finding the rough canvas of the mattress she must have had a bad dream wait she did this is the day of the day of the reaping I prop myself up on one elbow there is enough light in the bedroom to see my little sister curled up on her side cocooned in my mother body their cheeks pressed tougher in sleep my mother looks younger .prims face looks as fresh as a raindrop, as lovely as a primrose which she was named .My mother was dutiful to once. <br /><br /><br /><br /><br />from<br />LiamAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-10700642954307266812013-10-13T20:01:49.860-07:002013-10-13T20:01:49.860-07:00Dear Annabella and fourth graders,
I haven't ...Dear Annabella and fourth graders,<br /><br />I haven't thought of a poem to write yet but I just read a funny one called "Adventures of Isabel" by Ogden Nash. Here is the first part of it with some delicious language:<br /><br />Isabel met an enormous bear,<br />Isabel, Isabel, didn't care;<br />The bear was hungry, the bear was ravenous,<br />The bear's big mouth was cruel and cavernous.<br />The bear said, Isabel, glad to meet you,<br />How do, Isabel, now I'll eat you!<br />Isabel, Isabel, didn't worry.<br />Isabel didn't scream or scurry.<br />She washed her hands and she straightened her hair up,<br />Then Isabel quietly ate the bear up.<br /><br />I hope you enjoy it!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />LindsyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-50144618786144259902013-10-11T12:55:36.794-07:002013-10-11T12:55:36.794-07:00Dear Ms. Avera, I read the Sasquatch book “...Dear Ms. Avera, I read the Sasquatch book “Boys without names” by Kashmira Sheth. On page 9 I noticed when it said” There are some fruits left, so I pick a handful of pods and settle on the limb of a nearby nimba tree that arches over the pond.” I like it when it said “arches over the pond.” Instead of “it was over the pond” <br /> I can’t wait to see your descriptive writing. <br /> <br /><br /><br /> From,<br /> Tori<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-35354744639723810622013-10-11T12:51:36.865-07:002013-10-11T12:51:36.865-07:00Dear 4th Graders,
I read a book called Alfie All A...Dear 4th Graders,<br />I read a book called Alfie All Alone and it is written by Holly Webb. “Sam made little squeaky, grunting noises to himself, and Alfie woofed quietly back, his eyes slowly closing as he drifted off for a snooze”. I like how she used “little squeaky, grunting noises” and drifted off for a snooze” instead of “Sam made little noises to himself and Alfie woofed quietly and slept.”<br />From,<br />Charlize<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-20970802109530636102013-10-09T13:08:17.691-07:002013-10-09T13:08:17.691-07:00Dear Eli,
I want to read the Goosebumps book &quo...Dear Eli,<br /><br />I want to read the Goosebumps book "How I Got My Shrunken Head" but I don't know if it's any good. If you could respond and tell me if it's amazing or the worst thing you have ever read that would great!<br /><br />Sincerly, Miranda Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-35828979928157833192013-10-09T13:08:07.636-07:002013-10-09T13:08:07.636-07:00Dear Lindsey,
I am sorry but I do not really read...Dear Lindsey,<br /> I am sorry but I do not really read poems because I like to read Dairy of a Wimpy Kid series. I will see if Mr. Pahl has any poem kind of books. Say maybe you can make me a poem and after that I will try to remember what a poem is like, then I will make you a poem of my own. <br /> From : AnnabellaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-88712764636274268512013-10-09T13:07:14.358-07:002013-10-09T13:07:14.358-07:00Dear Eric, Where were they (or he she). But that h...Dear Eric, Where were they (or he she). But that helps visualize the story by saying briskly instead of hitting the wall with the match. And the author described the wooden crate that’s very delicious. But one more thing though, if you read more you get more details (or learns more).<br />From Elijah<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-19058188072311531642013-10-09T13:04:33.907-07:002013-10-09T13:04:33.907-07:00Dear Eli,
Were where they when you said you’ve go...Dear Eli,<br /><br />Were where they when you said you’ve got to be fast enough to swing vine to vine without letting go?<br /><br />From,<br />Eric<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com