tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post4212319674718019699..comments2024-01-03T11:10:14.929-08:00Comments on Sunnyland 4th Grade!: Who? What? When? Where? Why? PoemsMr. Pahlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14214375301706299614noreply@blogger.comBlogger60125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-10561942733193269242014-05-03T14:42:20.820-07:002014-05-03T14:42:20.820-07:00Kyle, I am curious about your poem, did you recent...Kyle, I am curious about your poem, did you recently watch the Lorax? or a movie about Whos or did you read a book that brought you to teh planet of whoville? I loved how you ended the poem with "it may seem weird, but they love it."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-7308121894606730462014-05-03T14:37:54.979-07:002014-05-03T14:37:54.979-07:00Anny, I loved reading your poem, sounds like you h...Anny, I loved reading your poem, sounds like you have had a fun easter.I agree with what Mary said, I loved how you used the word Marshmallow to describe your house, that is so much more exciting than white or cream even! Great poem and great description on your sister learning how to walk, i can picture walking very unstable all over the place!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-19408840391284821822014-05-03T14:35:05.867-07:002014-05-03T14:35:05.867-07:00Asher, I enjoyed reading your poem, I have such a ...Asher, I enjoyed reading your poem, I have such a funny picture in my mind when I read this poem, you sister seems like a fun friend to have around!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-16911364015469927292014-05-03T14:32:09.786-07:002014-05-03T14:32:09.786-07:00Kayden, I love this poem! It is very sweet. I have...Kayden, I love this poem! It is very sweet. I have an older sister who use to trick me like that all the time. You use great vocabulary in your poem, i love the description: dark joyful saturday night, I also like how you describe your brother as silly, good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-57107234045136347512014-05-03T14:23:25.825-07:002014-05-03T14:23:25.825-07:00Neri, Sounds like you all are nice caring brothers...Neri, Sounds like you all are nice caring brothers by helping your brother get prepared for some rough football! I loved how you were detailed about the type of tree in your yard, it helped me picture you all passing the ball in my head. Do you think you will want to play football as well? This could be practice for you too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-61251820362744607352014-05-03T14:21:31.382-07:002014-05-03T14:21:31.382-07:00Avarielle, This poem reminds me of my home during ...Avarielle, This poem reminds me of my home during Easter. I love how you described your house as big and yellow!, I am picturing the most spring easter home, I can sense your excitement about Easter in your poem. Were the eggs eggs you died, or plastic eggs filled with a surprise?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-16002626153245936012014-05-03T14:19:29.323-07:002014-05-03T14:19:29.323-07:00Cam, This seem so interesting to me. This poem mak...Cam, This seem so interesting to me. This poem makes me want to know more about Steve, he is like a mountain pirate finding treasure! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-31561517525672349032014-05-03T14:17:43.538-07:002014-05-03T14:17:43.538-07:00You have a lizard? Wow! That is so cool. You could...You have a lizard? Wow! That is so cool. You could always put "All the time" in your when column! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14014231158128249828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-33105984918730680262014-04-29T19:02:54.728-07:002014-04-29T19:02:54.728-07:00Awesome use of vocabulary here! I laughed when I r...Awesome use of vocabulary here! I laughed when I read the comparison of your brother to a "crazy baboon". I like that you not only described your brother, but paid attention to the details of the small thing like your "sky blue" tablet. Nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-10989279255130362762014-04-29T18:58:59.302-07:002014-04-29T18:58:59.302-07:00Anny, I really liked how you used "marshmallo...Anny, I really liked how you used "marshmallow" as a word to describe your house! How creative. I never would have thought of that one. The word marshmallow is so much more fun than white. Good poem!<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-54018606157819612432014-04-25T14:38:38.198-07:002014-04-25T14:38:38.198-07:00Hi there!
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The ...Hi there!<br />I really enjoyed reading your poem. The descriptions you used painted a great picture in my head, and I think it's funny your baby brother's favorite song is from Katy Perry! Keep up the great work!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing,<br />Brittany (WWU student)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02987222946008843885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-17829361318569566882014-04-25T14:32:27.533-07:002014-04-25T14:32:27.533-07:00Dear Eli,
Your poem is very descriptive! I could p...Dear Eli,<br />Your poem is very descriptive! I could picture the tall grass, and men hurrying get back their king. I wonder what inspired you to write this poem? I give it two thumbs up! Nice work.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing,<br />Brittany (WWU student)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02987222946008843885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-35166620551151791872014-04-24T10:44:55.148-07:002014-04-24T10:44:55.148-07:00What a creative poem! I loved reading it!What a creative poem! I loved reading it!KylaMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08215817445589150309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-5818501764120498352014-04-23T10:03:26.516-07:002014-04-23T10:03:26.516-07:00Who? Tim
What? Sprinted to the Batmobile
When? Dur...Who? Tim<br />What? Sprinted to the Batmobile<br />When? During midnight<br />Where? Top secret science lab<br />Why? To genetically mutate people<br /><br /><br />Tim, an exited man in his late twenty’s, sprinted to his Batmobile with his sidekick Brandon at midnight, and drove to the top secret science lab to genetically mutate people.<br /><br /><br /> From Tim. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-89247553363404771952014-04-23T10:00:53.380-07:002014-04-23T10:00:53.380-07:00Who? Monster
What? Fell
Where? The dump
When? 1:00...Who? Monster<br />What? Fell<br />Where? The dump<br />When? 1:00 a.m.<br />Why? Not smart<br />An ogely boogely purple nosed monster with a pencil yellow pencil tumbled down the candy bridge at 1:00 a.m. in the rotting dump because he did not know how to do math.<br />By Bella Matthews<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-77859137605214974112014-04-23T09:58:03.748-07:002014-04-23T09:58:03.748-07:00Who: Brandon
What: Dancing happily
When: At night...Who: Brandon<br />What: Dancing happily <br />When: At night<br />Where: Mt. St. Helens<br />Why: Jumping off<br /><br />When Brandon was outside he was dancing happily at night when the bright moon shining Brandon hopped on a bus so he could go to Mt. St. Helen's once the bus arrived Brandon jumped out of the bus and jumped off of Mt. St. Helen's ahhhhhhhhh SPLAT! <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-15716577093171688602014-04-23T09:56:01.297-07:002014-04-23T09:56:01.297-07:00Who? Francis the puppet
What? Awoke on a dark lig...Who? Francis the puppet <br />What? Awoke on a dark lightning filled night<br />When? At midnight<br />Where? In a abandon subway<br />Why? To grab a bight <br /> <br /><br /><br />It was November 1st and Francis the puppet awoke in a flash for it was a electric charged night and he woke up on a stained glass shelf around midnight in a abandon subway to grab a bight of stale left over saltines.<br />By, Jaymeson <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-60980730224088858352014-04-23T09:55:03.069-07:002014-04-23T09:55:03.069-07:00Who? Angle
What? Flew
Where? The library
When? Sat...Who? Angle<br />What? Flew<br />Where? The library<br />When? Saturday <br />Why? Read<br />A lovely Angle faithfully flew. To the lovely lime green library at 2:00. To read rough ringing rebellious books, that will hook like a worm on a hook you from the first Inky word.<br />By Bella Matthews<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-14224362969739727172014-04-23T09:54:57.782-07:002014-04-23T09:54:57.782-07:00Who? Francis the puppet
What? Awoke on a dark lig...Who? Francis the puppet <br />What? Awoke on a dark lightning filled night<br />When? At midnight<br />Where? In a abandon subway<br />Why? To grab a bight <br /> <br /><br /><br />It was November 1st and Francis the puppet awoke in a flash for it was a electric charged night and he woke up on a stained glass shelf around midnight in a abandon subway to grab a bight of stale left over saltines.<br />By, Jaymeson <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-42371872285387074462014-04-23T09:53:05.205-07:002014-04-23T09:53:05.205-07:00Dear Mr. Pahl,
Who? Vanessa and Sarah
What? Went t...Dear Mr. Pahl,<br />Who? Vanessa and Sarah<br />What? Went to get food <br />When? After school <br />Where? At Dairy Queen<br />Why? We had a enough money <br /><br />Sarah and I <br />Went to get food for our stomachs <br />After school we were famished and bored <br />Dairy Queen was close to our house <br />We had a enough money to buy what we wanted<br /><br /> By Vanessa<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-75858335835696096032014-04-23T09:51:40.843-07:002014-04-23T09:51:40.843-07:00Who? Little tank
What? Drove up the hill
When? Ear...Who? Little tank<br />What? Drove up the hill<br />When? Early morning<br />Where? D Day<br />Why? To win the war<br /><br />The green little tank<br /> Treaded up the mortar and bullet holed hill<br /> On an early smoky morning on the grimy D DAY<br /> To win the terrible war.<br />From Benjamin<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-24089056186786364492014-04-23T09:50:53.268-07:002014-04-23T09:50:53.268-07:00Who? Commander J. Bob
What? Ran behind seawall
Whe...Who? Commander J. Bob<br />What? Ran behind seawall<br />When? Early morning<br />Where? D Day<br />Why? Reload rifle<br /><br />Young pale Commander J. Bob<br />Ran behind the muddy seawall<br />In the early smoky morning <br />On the grimy D Day beach<br />To reload his rifle.<br />From Benjamin<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-58678936787418619942014-04-23T09:50:31.571-07:002014-04-23T09:50:31.571-07:00Who? Frost witch
What? Picked up her spell book
Wh...Who? Frost witch<br />What? Picked up her spell book<br />When? Break of dawn <br />Where? The outskirts of a village<br />Why? To attack for loot<br /><br /><br />The tall Frost witch <br />Picked up her enormous spell book<br />In the break of dawn <br />At the outskirts of a village to attack and steal their precious loot. <br />From,<br />Eric<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-54337318020176824012014-04-23T09:49:46.017-07:002014-04-23T09:49:46.017-07:00Dear Mr. Pahl,
My mom hates it when I put frozen...Dear Mr. Pahl, <br /> My mom hates it when I put frozen on because I say all the words to it.<br /> I like it when the giant from the shop says” YooHoo, Big summer blow out, half off swimming suits, glogs, and sun block in my adventure, ya!”<br />I also like when aloaf says” I dont have a skull………or……….Bones”<br />My favorite character is aloaf and ana.<br />My favorite song is Do you wanna build a snowman, Let it go my sister loves let it go and she is 16 years old. My other favorite song is Love is an open door.<br />From Evyn <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8905854320067786185.post-66939551271365589942014-04-23T09:47:44.111-07:002014-04-23T09:47:44.111-07:00Who? Commander J. Bob
What? Ran behind seawall
Whe...Who? Commander J. Bob<br />What? Ran behind seawall<br />When? Early morning<br />Where? D Day<br />Why? Reload rifle<br /><br />Young pale Commander J. Bob<br />Ran behind the muddy seawall<br />In the early smoky morning <br />On the grimy D Day beach<br />To reload his rifle.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com